The doorbell rang.
Bosco and Banjo the family’s two dogs tore from the living room. Bosco hit the scatter rug, landed on his rump and slid into position in front of the door, where Banjo joined him a few seconds later, both dogs barking furiously.
Janet shouted over the noise of the television, children and barking dogs “Eric, can you get the door?”
The doorbell rang again. Janet took a deep, calming, cleansing breath, raised her voice an octave and shouted again “Eric! My hands are covered in flour, can you please get the door!”
This time her words rang out as a command rather than a request.
The doorbell rang one more time. Janet rolled her eyes and reached for a towel. The last thing she wanted to deal with today was another donation seeker.
Already stretched to her budget’s limits, she prayed the cause would be frivolous, ensuring no guilt when she said, “I’m sorry it’s not in our budget this month.”
With Eric’s unemployment running out and no jobs to be found Christmas was going to be difficult enough this year.
The doorbell rang again, and Janet snatched the door open, the words “Good grief” dying on her lips at the sight which greeted her.
“Merry Christmas ma’am” the man from the local fire department, dressed liked Santa thrust a basket filled with wrapped gifts into her hands.
Another basket filled with food, was set at her feet, “Christmas blessings to you and yours” said a woman dressed like Mrs. Clause.
Janet stared stunned, at the crowd of Carolers gathered at her front door. She lifted her eyes to heaven, found and focused on the Christmas Star.
Two tears rolled down her cheeks, and as the Carolers burst into “Joy To The World,” snow began to fall.
(After reading a post at Gone For A Walk, I checked out Write On The Edge [I really do learn so much from all of you!] and decided to try my hand at one of their writing prompts. I can’t wait to hear what you think.)
Laura Horn says
OMG – Jodi, did you write this??? I have tears in my eyes. Good Grief you are really getting GOOD!!!!!!! 😀
deb phelps says
I have tears also. Tis the season of miracles
Jodi Stone says
Yes I REALLY wrote it! LOL thanks Laura! Merry Christmas.
deb phelps says
What a beautiful miracle.
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Deb, it’s just what sprang to mind. 🙂 Merry Christmas!
kaleba says
Well done! Brought a tear to my eye. Congrats on your first RemembeRED– feels great, doesn’t it?
Jodi Stone says
It does feel great! I had seen other bloggers mention it but had no idea. I will be checking that site now!
Jan says
Nice story. This is indeed the season of miracles.
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Jan, yes miracles seem to happen this time of year. 🙂
Bassas Blog says
Lovely story Jodi. It brought a lump to my throat.
Jodi Stone says
Thank you Bassas!
Married with Dawgs says
Great story – you made me tear up!
Jodi Stone says
Thanks! Happy tears I hope!
Patty says
Very touching! Add me to the list of those who are teary eyed after reading.
Jodi Stone says
Aww, thanks Patty, it’s what sprang to mind. 🙂
lexy3587 says
aww, so sweet 🙂 I love the hectic atmosphere of the story – you captured the stress of the holidays, and more.
Jodi Stone says
What is it about the holidays that make us stress so? You’d think with family around maybe it wouldn’t be quite so hectic, wouldn’t you?
Venus says
This is so lovely! I really enjoyed that moment of realization when we know we’ve been frustrated to no purpose, and are instead very pleasantly surprised. 🙂 You captured that very well, and it’s also lovely to read a story about giving!
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Venus, it sort of reminded me of my Thanksgiving day when it started poorly but then I received a surprise phone call from my nephew in Afghanistan.
Kirsten says
That is beautiful and joyful. I’m tearing up too! Hope your season is full of gifts and warmth, not to mention wags and wonder 🙂
Jodi Stone says
Back at you Kirsten! Especially the wags…oh and wet kisses too. 🙂
Kristy @PampersandPinot says
This post was truly in the Christmas spirit!
Jodi Stone says
Thank you Kristy!
barb19 says
I just found you through 2BrownDawgs blog, and so glad I did! This post touched my heart, and it’s only my first visit to your blog – it was written so well, like a story.
I’ve subscribed to your wonderful blog, as I love hearing about other people’s dogs (I am a dog lover too).
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Barb and welcome! I look forward to checking out your blog too. 🙂
Misty Shores Chesapeakes says
Wonderful story, very touching and such a great reminder that our needs will be met. I can’t wait to read more.
I have another writer friend you might like to check out her blog at
http://before50writer.wordpress.com/ she is a wonderful writer, I had the pleasure of reading one of her books in draft form and I loved it.
Jodi Stone says
Thank you Misty, it was spontaneous and really didn’t take me long at all. I can’t wait to check out your friend’s blog.
Mary Ann says
I like it! You did a nice job of writing this piece of fiction, which is very different from what you usually write.
I could feel the main character’s frustration.
Nicely done. Hope to see you on Write on Edge more:)
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Mary Ann, it’s funny even though you’ve written about this exercise it didn’t click until today. I look forwad to doing more of these prompts.
Donna and the Dogs says
Wow Jodi – I didn’t realize you did fiction. I really enjoyed it, and of course, it’s a perfect fit both for the season and the state of things as of late. Nice job. Thanks for sharing it.
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Donna, what I usually write on the blog is real life, but I have novels running around inside my head. I just don’t know how (or have the discipline) to get them out. 🙂
Donna and the Dogs says
Well then, go find the discipline – you’re a good writer. Plus, I’d love to be able to pick up a novel one day and say, hey, that’s my friend Jodi’s book! She’s a crazy Lab owner too!
2browndawgs says
Well done. 🙂
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Friend.
angela says
I love the transition between her growing frustration about the doorbell to the lovely surprise waiting behind the door. It felt very realistic.
Jodi Stone says
It happens that way sometimes, doesn’t it? We are totally frustrated or angry about something and then somehow it turns into something good. Thanks for checking out the blog!
shoes says
It was the details of getting to the door that made it for me – so vivid. Very well done!! I will have to check out this Write on the Edge you linked to.
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Shoes, I remember so well the business that comes with having children. It’s just what popped into my mind when I saw the prompt. 🙂
Kas says
This made me tear up!! BEAUTIFUL!! 🙂
Jodi Stone says
Thank you, it made me teary writing it! LOL
monicastangledweb says
Bassas’ BBC news sent me to you. Lovely story. So heartwarming. 🙂
Jodi Stone says
Thank you Monica and welcome! I will check out your blog.;-)
Shary Hover says
I’m a visitor from Bassa’s blog, too. Love this story. Great twist at the end.
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Shary, appreciate you stopping by. Glad you liked the story.
Cameron says
I love the dogs most of all. Seriously. They grounded me in the household and invested me in the events right from the start.
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Cameron, I don’t think I could have written it without dogs in it in some way! They ground me every day. 🙂
Chancy, Mumsy and Crew says
What a wonderful story and Christmas miracle…love it! Hugs
Jodi Stone says
Thank you so much! Hugs back at ya!
Genevieve says
Reading Bassas Blog, I almost didn’t click your link. But I’m glad I did. I LOVE your story. With a few words you said a lot!
Jodi Stone says
Thanks so much, it was my venture into the writing prompt and I was taken by surprise at how it just came out. 🙂
rumpydog says
What a lovely story!!!
Jodi Stone says
Thanks Rumpy!
sassykassy says
Loved this story, Jodi, and loved it Even More when I realized you had written it!! Wow! Very very lovely.
georgefloreswrite says
Just got a chance to read this Jodi, I’ve been avoiding WordPress… I have to agree with Venus, she said what I would have. Those are the kind of things that give us a jolt. We’re down and then we find out that the “bother” is in our best interest. I had this happen with a guy I thought hated me when he asked to speak with me away from my friends. I felt like punching him because I thought he was going to say something unpleasant to me. Imagine my surprise when he asked me out! Same in your story. You captured the jolt. Very good!
Jodi Stone says
Thanks George. I’m sorry you haven’t been around, I’ve missed you!